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one more try

November 7, 2010
By josa16 BRONZE, Miami Florida, Florida
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even though what you did was wrong .i can still give you one more try cause thats how much i still care bout you ,but even though im taking you back the love i have for you is hanging in the balance.and im giving you one more try becausei feel in love with you .

© Elizabeth G., Marblehead, MA

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i love this because i know how it feels to have someone in your heart and even though they did some selfish thingg i can still find it in my heart to give them one more try.
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