Who am I now?

November 3, 2010
You are a man so run away, I am a woman so I must stay.
I look through my window and ask myself “Who am I now?”
It really does seem that things are only getting worse,
And the helping hands only seem to coerce.
Where do you turn when all the paths seem wrong?
The life I once had is forever gone.
Time passes by without my consent; things just are not the same.
Where are you now and who are you with?
I’m not ready to be alone.

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gracegirl29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 6:41 pm

i really enjoyed it, but more so at the beginning. I would suggest maybe adding a bit more at the end to make it perfect. Check out my work please!! :)

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whammy replied...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 8:48 pm
Thank you for your feedback! And I would love to check out your work. So, give me a heads up if you have any preferences. If not, I will just choose at random!
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