Who am I now?

November 3, 2010
By whammy BRONZE, Place, Illinois
whammy BRONZE, Place, Illinois
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You are a man so run away, I am a woman so I must stay.
I look through my window and ask myself “Who am I now?”
It really does seem that things are only getting worse,
And the helping hands only seem to coerce.
Where do you turn when all the paths seem wrong?
The life I once had is forever gone.
Time passes by without my consent; things just are not the same.
Where are you now and who are you with?
I’m not ready to be alone.


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whammy BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 8:48 pm
whammy BRONZE, Place, Illinois
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Thank you for your feedback! And I would love to check out your work. So, give me a heads up if you have any preferences. If not, I will just choose at random!

on Dec. 16 2010 at 6:41 pm
sweetly_broken GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
We never know how big we are until we are asked to rise.

i really enjoyed it, but more so at the beginning. I would suggest maybe adding a bit more at the end to make it perfect. Check out my work please!! :)

~ Kirby



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