my heart

October 26, 2010
By crmsrox BRONZE, Coon Rapids, Minnesota
crmsrox BRONZE, Coon Rapids, Minnesota
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My heart has been broken in many ways
One for example if u dident know my mom passed
And another I just got dumped hard
So as you can see my heart is broken

My mom

I was sleeping when she passed
My sister heard a loud thump
I woke up to her lying on the floor
So then my heart began to break

She had died Tuesday September 2nd 2010
We had the funeral Wednesday September 8th 2010
It was so sad
(I was kind of a mama’s boy)

Now my mom was not a normal mom
She got a science degree, was a baseball coach for 5 years,
Also she was rich so u can kind of see what me allowance was
Now as you can see my heart is broken.


My girlfriend


My girlfriend and I were going so good
We went on dates, mingled (talked), and met up with friends
But when SHE dumped me I was heart broken
So then I got a new gf but it dident feel the same

It’s like your favorite picture of something got lost and you can’t find it
So when she saw me with my new girlfriend she was so mad
So she got herself a new boy toy
I was devastated

I begged her back but she said “NO”
“Ive got a new boyfriend”
So we are not talking anymore but I still love her to this day
So as you can see my heart is severely broken


My heart


The author's comments:
its really for my ila class but i still want u yo comment on it

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crmsrox BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 12:47 pm
crmsrox BRONZE, Coon Rapids, Minnesota
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 ok but ya thx for the support

faji said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 12:46 pm
life's hard sorry about your girlfriend


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