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I took your
mind when I
read your secret
book

which was
near and dear
and private.

I apologize,
but guilt is
no match for
a curious mind and
profitable information.





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Risible said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 4:26 pm
Nice. I really like this one. Well done with the language keeping it concise and using words that flow from to the other. And also great story to tell in a poem. Great job! 
 
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Nov. 20, 2010 at 7:51 pm
dont know who that is but i love this captain. at first it sounds so sincere then it sounds like youre making money off someone. youre hilarious captain. do your dance.
 
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