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woe is the man

October 26, 2010
By amarley BRONZE, Amherst, New York
amarley BRONZE, Amherst, New York
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Oh woe is the handsome lone man at the diner
Sitting waiting for his two faced debutante
Where is his beautiful brunette bonny lass
Was that one nightstand not supposed to last
As his soup gets colder
His hopes begin to falter
The waiter request for his exit
But no
This lone man is a adamant as a boulder
He will convince himself she will come
She will come
But nay as eleven rolls around he wonders were his spiteful lass has wandered off to
Defeated he wanders home
As he passes a thumping car he glances in the window
And as he presses his face against the cool window he sees her
His two faced debutante
Woe is the man who loves a *****



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on Nov. 22 2010 at 7:03 pm
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

 relly sensory and cool vibe. the last line made me laugh lol

on Nov. 22 2010 at 6:05 pm
wordsmith97 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
"And that's when I shot him," my dad.

Nice! There's somthing about the language that  makes somthing so sad really beautiful.

on Nov. 20 2010 at 1:55 pm
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD, Providence, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Artists paint on canvas; Musicians paint on silence

I also like the rhythm, and the language you use. It seems so.... appropriate for your topic! i will look for more!

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on Nov. 20 2010 at 1:09 pm
Savanne BRONZE, Colfax, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I was never going to amount to much anyway, but now, statistically speaking, there's a better chance that some part of me will go on to greatness somewhere in the world. I'd rather be partly great than entirely useless." ♥ -Unwind

That was really good. =) good job

on Nov. 19 2010 at 9:07 pm
CarrieAnne11 GOLD, Potsdam, New York
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I love this!! The rhythm is so cool, that plus the use of words like "lass" makes it sound like a fiddle song or something... nice job!!