woe is the man

October 26, 2010
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Oh woe is the handsome lone man at the diner
Sitting waiting for his two faced debutante
Where is his beautiful brunette bonny lass
Was that one nightstand not supposed to last
As his soup gets colder
His hopes begin to falter
The waiter request for his exit
But no
This lone man is a adamant as a boulder
He will convince himself she will come
She will come
But nay as eleven rolls around he wonders were his spiteful lass has wandered off to
Defeated he wanders home
As he passes a thumping car he glances in the window
And as he presses his face against the cool window he sees her
His two faced debutante
Woe is the man who loves a *****





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mimirocks124 said...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 7:03 pm
 relly sensory and cool vibe. the last line made me laugh lol
 
wordsmith97 said...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 6:05 pm
Nice! There's somthing about the language that  makes somthing so sad really beautiful.
 
-LeftBehindBroken- said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 1:55 pm
I also like the rhythm, and the language you use. It seems so.... appropriate for your topic! i will look for more!
 
vannie said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 1:09 pm
That was really good. =) good job
 
Carebear7n11 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 9:07 pm
I love this!! The rhythm is so cool, that plus the use of words like "lass" makes it sound like a fiddle song or something... nice job!!
 
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