Confused and Lost

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People lie,
people cheat
they do all kinds of stuff
so now I must think.

I know you wont hurt me
I know you really care
but there's just so many thoughts
wondering in the air.

They way I feel
you just can't understand
I am alone in this valley
with only 1 inch of land.

As I stand there
in this one little spot
there's only one thing to do
and that's to make my heart unlock.

I feel lost and confused
so I look left and right
I see nothing in this world
it's all out of sight.

Just lost in a field of flowers
I fell right down
but hey gets this
MY KNEES DID NOT TOUCH THE GROUND.





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kmarie14 said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 9:45 am
i love this!!! the rhyme scheme is really cool and the last line totally pullls it togethether :) great job! check out my work?
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 10:04 am
do me a favor look at my poem i wonder.... its the one with the lower case  i. I think thats the best and i like it TNX ill check yours out
 
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