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Tragic start to a good ending

October 22, 2010
By Devin Dawson BRONZE, Dallas, Georgia
Devin Dawson BRONZE, Dallas, Georgia
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Tragic Start to a Good Ending

















Welcome to my misery! What a spectacle, I must say!




My charred life is put on display for all to say.





With every glance, I die. Brought back to life was the shell of a man who’s soul was slowly going mad inside.








The writing on the walls shows clear the state I am in.

















I may write sins but, I don’t write tragedies.






But, oh well…who am I to complain?







With my legacy put to an end, people actually give a thought about me.

Was it because they pitied me?




















Was it because they wished death on me?






I haven’t the foggiest idea…..








Damned I was from the beginning……







All I could say was, “Maybe I shouldn’t….”



















The thought died as I tied the rope around my neck.




A smirk of success was splayed on my face as I was lifted in the air like a cherry blossom.











Now, that my life has ended, can you say that your life has just begun?

The author's comments:
This is about a boy who has been treated bad all of his life and over the years he came up wit the mindset that if he doesn't live anymore, everyone else will be happier. Its a sad story about how I felt before a few years ago.

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