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just STOP. im moving on.

November 2, 2010
By Vivis BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
Vivis BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what makes YOU happy. not what makes others happy."


Alright. just stop.
yeah i've said some things and done some things.
but stop.
yeah i've cried because of you
and because of what we used to be
but just stop.
movin' on isn't the easiest thing to do...
but it's not impossible.
im tryna move on
but yeah thoughts of you still linger in my heart and mind.
but im movin' on.
not EVERYTHING i write is about you.
not EVERY thought i have is about you
not every move i have revolves around you.
So stop.
yeah we still have some friends in common.
but im separating my life from yours now.
letting you live yours.
while i live mines.
yeah im not making the right decisions
but everything happens for a reason.
so stop.
Yeah im movin' on.
even if some things you do STILL hurt me.
BUT don't mind my feelings, don't mind my tears.
Cuz we knew this would happen
and now...
im just Movin' On.
so stop.


The author's comments:
What inspired to write this piece was the fact that i just wanted to show my ex that im moving on. I love expressing what goes on in my head through poetry.

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paola said...
on Nov. 20 2010 at 3:24 pm
than if there are any other poems i look forward to reading them.

Vivis BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 6:42 pm
Vivis BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what makes YOU happy. not what makes others happy."

thank you (: and i've sent as least 5  poems to be submitted and this one is the only one that has been published. (so far)

paola said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 5:55 pm
I love this poem. maybe you should consider sending the website other poems if you had any. you sound like a very dedicated writer i look forward to reading them.

jorgji said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:03 pm

omg! i love it ! 

you inspire me so much :) lol 


mleveypabst said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 6:39 pm
I love the use of repetition.  Excellent work!

jahira said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 5:43 pm
omg i love this manita great job =] i like it soo much i really felt the emotion behind the words ^-^