Thee Applies To We

November 2, 2010
By ms.long4eva SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
ms.long4eva SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you fabric, make a clothing line.


God said, “In my image did I make thee”
Don’t forget he said the same to me.
So next time you criticize humanity.
Remember God made us the way we should be.
My brown is beautiful.
From my head to my feet.
From the thoughts of my mind
To the sound of my heartbeat.
I am young and bright,
As ambitious as can be.
Capture my insight
And learn from me.
I’ve been known to teach both young and old.
So if you listen, you just may be sold.
God said, “In my image did I make thee.”
You should always remember that thee applies to we.


The author's comments:
Just thought this up one day...
Hope you like it!

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on Nov. 22 2010 at 12:20 pm
ms.long4eva SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you fabric, make a clothing line.

thank you very much.

 


on Nov. 19 2010 at 12:26 pm
PalabrasHermosas, Winnsboro, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.\"
---Walt Emerson

I love this poem and I totally agree with everything you are saying. It is beautiful. I love poems that have a message in them and your message is very clear. This poem is magnificent for someone who just thought of it one day. GREAT JOB!!! 5 STARS

on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:38 pm
K.H.D. PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"KID YOU'LL MOVE MOUNTAINS!

So...
be your name Buxbaum or Bixby or Bray
or Mordecai Ali Van Alenn O'Shea
you're off to Great Places!
Today is your day!
Your mountain is waiting.
So... get on your way!" - Dr. Seuss, "Oh! The Places You'll Go"

Amazing! I love it!
I rated five stars for you. :)

on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:05 pm
girlwiththebracelets BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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i love it!


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