You Never Held Me Up..

November 14, 2010
By Simply,Savannah GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
Simply,Savannah GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go where the path may lead.. Go instead where there is no path, and leave a trail" -Emerson


Can’t you see that you’re the one for me?
Didn’t you know I wasn’t ready to let go?
I loved what we had.
So why does it have to end on a note so bad?
You promised you wouldn’t hurt me.
You said you would try and help
And all I could do
Was play the cards that were dealt.
I tried my hardest not to loose this game.
I lost, but am not the one to blame.
For it is you that should feel ashamed
You mislead me with your gorgeous smile.
That made the time we shared all worth wile.
Out of all of the people in the world,
You’re the one I can’t stand,
So why do I still long for your hand?
I am finally done with all our fights
So why is it hard for me to sleep at night?
Why can’t you realize how much I need you?
I just want to hear “I love you too.”
I want to know this isn’t the last straw,
I want to know you didn’t go far.
I’m not ready to start over,
Not ready to cry upon another shoulder.
It is you I want.
And you only,
Without you I feel terribly lonely.
Not sure if I am strong enough to continue alone.
Didn’t you see, that when times got rough,
It was you I needed to hold me up?
But this time, you’re the one that made me fall
Through your fingers I slipped,
And lost it all.



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on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:33 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Its not over till its over

this is a wonderfully great thought out poem it is really good i loved it. :)

on Nov. 16 2010 at 2:11 pm
Simply,Savannah GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go where the path may lead.. Go instead where there is no path, and leave a trail" -Emerson

Thankyou. (:

on Nov. 16 2010 at 1:57 pm
wo0w dis is so great

on Nov. 16 2010 at 12:41 pm
Simply,Savannah GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go where the path may lead.. Go instead where there is no path, and leave a trail" -Emerson

Thankyou, i appreciate it.

Dren12 said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:53 pm
Dren12, Brevard, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't love me at my worst, then you don't deserve me at my best"

This was a very very good poem...it sounds so familiar though because i can personally say that i can relate to it...keep writing

on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:28 pm
This was beautiful! I love your poetry!

on Nov. 15 2010 at 5:14 pm
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway

This is BEAUTIFUL! :D

on Nov. 15 2010 at 1:43 pm
Simply,Savannah GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go where the path may lead.. Go instead where there is no path, and leave a trail" -Emerson

Thanks! this is how i felt when my boyfriend of two years broke my heart.. i'm glad it reached you too.

on Nov. 15 2010 at 12:19 pm
thisiswhatiwant. BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if i cant handle you at your low points i dont deserve you at your high points do i??" -bffl

amazing. i feel the same way about my ex boyfriend. and when i told him this we are thinking about getting back together now. i just dont want it to end like it did the first time.


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