Waiting

November 13, 2010
By TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
227 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Anything said by Mr. T
- Ill be in my bunk
- Im so clever that half the time I don't even understand what I'm saying


I never wanted to be that girl
the one who drifts
who day dreams and who yearns
I have always been the level headed one
starlight dwindles to another day
I taste the scent of crab-apples in the air
my life is sweet and good
and small
and there is nothing left to do for me
but wait


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ipodchick12 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 9:33 am
i really like tyhis poem, its an awesome piece

on Nov. 18 2010 at 3:37 pm
LouiseBabbbbe21 BRONZE, Stoke On Trent, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Love is Blind

This is so true, it applys so well

on Nov. 17 2010 at 1:46 pm
TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
227 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Anything said by Mr. T
- Ill be in my bunk
- Im so clever that half the time I don't even understand what I'm saying

sure, id love too. what an honor.

on Nov. 17 2010 at 1:15 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

 Wow this is so good and descriptive!! I love it!!! Could you possibly check out and rate/comment on my work!!! thanks so much adn ur sucha good writer!!!!!

on Nov. 15 2010 at 11:40 pm
Kenzie413 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"That which me manifest is before us. The car goes where the eyes go."

really great poem :)

on Nov. 15 2010 at 9:12 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
45 articles 15 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream it. Be it."
"Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body."
"Paper is more patient than man."
"Where you live shouldn't determine whether you live"

really nice :)

on Nov. 15 2010 at 6:11 pm
TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
227 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Anything said by Mr. T
- Ill be in my bunk
- Im so clever that half the time I don't even understand what I'm saying

Thanks. It means alot to me when people like my work enough to comment on it.

Kandin said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 2:22 pm
Its a really beautiful poem!!!!!!!


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