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November 13, 2010
I never wanted to be that girl
the one who drifts
who day dreams and who yearns
I have always been the level headed one
starlight dwindles to another day
I taste the scent of crab-apples in the air
my life is sweet and good
and small
and there is nothing left to do for me
but wait





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ipodchick12 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 9:33 am
i really like tyhis poem, its an awesome piece
 
LouiseBabbbbe21 said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 3:37 pm
This is so true, it applys so well
 
crubs33 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 1:15 pm
 Wow this is so good and descriptive!! I love it!!! Could you possibly check out and rate/comment on my work!!! thanks so much adn ur sucha good writer!!!!!
 
IndiLizard This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 1:46 pm
sure, id love too. what an honor.
 
Kenzie413 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 11:40 pm
really great poem :)
 
hi_from_wonderland said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 9:12 pm
really nice :)
 
Kandin said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 2:22 pm
Its a really beautiful poem!!!!!!!
 
IndiLizard This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 6:11 pm
Thanks. It means alot to me when people like my work enough to comment on it.
 
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