A Revolution

November 5, 2010
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God had a great gift

that he passed on to me

And no it wasn't self humility

It wasn't vanity

Or sanity

Or compassion for humanity

It was an injection

Of direction

For full fledged affection

A motion

For devotion

Meaning a revolution

The rebellion

Of "isms"





And I say that we wont miss ism

He didn't give me normality

Or formality

But a tinge of originality

That I would see

no race is better

no class is higher

and no person is better

He didn't give me tranquility

Or fragility

And sure as hell not conformity

A confliction

Of conviction

With the eviction

Of restriction

So I challenge you

To self preservation

the reservation

Of the human kind

Because the great gift god gave me

Is that I'm color blind

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ipodchick12 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 9:37 am
this is the BEST peom i have ever read and i really like the rhyme makes it even more fun to read!!!!!!xD
bulbul said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:22 am
very well written and definitely a beautiful thought! :)
Nicole93 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 7:30 am
This is AWESOME!!!!! I love this! the rhyme scheme makes it so much better and gives it more of an impact:) gooodjob:D
crubs33 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 1:15 pm
Wow this is so good and descriptive!! I love it!!! Could you possibly check out and rate/comment on my work!!! thanks so much adn ur sucha good writer!!!!!
hi_from_wonderland said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 9:14 pm
wow so true! :)
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