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Bright as Day…. Dark as Night

Bright as day
Dark as night
We have made our last and final plight
No lies forgiven
For the lives forsaken
For every final breath taken
We have made our plight
Bright as day
Dark as night
Hope is lost
Faith is going
Lives are lost
All are dead and gone
Sins are normality
Life is cruel and hard
Normality is a formality
We have lost all reality
All is a nightmare
All is a dream
Hearts have gone black
Lifeless limbs lay slack
No one and nothing are coming back
Bright as day
Dark as night
We have made our last, helpless plight




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crubs33This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 1:21 pm:
Wow omg this is so good and descriptive!! i love it!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be amazing!! thanksso much and ur so good!!!
 
Killerkate replied...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 7:09 pm :
thanks! no prob
 
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Jennaaa said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 10:33 am:
love this (:
 
NikkiNitrogen replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 7:22 pm :
lol thanks=)
 
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