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My Storm

By , Bellevue, NE
Sometimes,
When the thought
Of you not loving me
Becomes too painful to handle,
I go outside,
At night,
In the rain
And I scream your name
Over and over
Until each raindrop falling down on me
Echoes my cry.
And then,
When I am soaked and shivering,
I allow myself to cry,
And let my tears mix with the rain
And my shaking and sobbing
Takes over the shivering
So no one can tell that I miss you
And that I’m not strong.
In the end the rain will stop,
And I will dry my eyes and move forward,
Because that’s the only way to go.



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crubs33This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 1:24 pm:
Wow omg this is so good and descriptive!! i love it!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be amazing!! thanksso much and ur so good!!!
 
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Jennaaa said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 10:38 am:
really good!!
 
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Kidlet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 9:35 am:
...wow. love it!
 
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