My Storm

October 31, 2010
By Anonymous

When the thought
Of you not loving me
Becomes too painful to handle,
I go outside,
At night,
In the rain
And I scream your name
Over and over
Until each raindrop falling down on me
Echoes my cry.
And then,
When I am soaked and shivering,
I allow myself to cry,
And let my tears mix with the rain
And my shaking and sobbing
Takes over the shivering
So no one can tell that I miss you
And that I’m not strong.
In the end the rain will stop,
And I will dry my eyes and move forward,
Because that’s the only way to go.

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on Nov. 17 2010 at 1:24 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow omg this is so good and descriptive!! i love it!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be amazing!! thanksso much and ur so good!!!

Jennaaa GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 10:38 am
Jennaaa GOLD, Congers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"live for the moment".
"live laugh love".

really good!!

on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:35 am
Kidlet PLATINUM, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"No longer will they call you Desterted, or name your land Desolate. But you will be called Hephzibah, and your land Beulah; for the Lord will take delight in you, and your land will be married." -Isaiah 62:4 love it!


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