October 31, 2010
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You have no hope

no chance that life will change

that tomorrow or the next day

the stars won’t rearrange

Your only views of this life

is that you want no more

selfish acts upon yourself

that takes you out the door

No regard of what you do

and what you leave behind

you say you are alone in this

how can you be so blind

Your feeling sorry for yourself

and decide it doesn’t matter

you will decide what you do

no thoughts of who might shatter

No stepping outside the box

of your dark cloudy mind

you will not give a second

glance to any ties that bind

And when the final curtain

blocks out the fading light

you no longer feel yourself

and somehow that seems right?

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F0rgtt3nDr34m5 said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 7:51 pm
This is really Really Inspiring (?) I cant think of another word for it.It is something that I struggled with these past few years...

I wrote a lot of poetry this past year, but I cant bring myself to post any of it... I dont like people seeing my work I guess
Artamis22 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 3:13 pm
That was very interesting in a good way it was so just i dont know it was cool.
Mislead said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 1:46 pm
i love this! and i disagree agree with you about the spacing. i think it works with the theme of te poem because she/he is far away from everybody else like shes in her own little world. perfect!
_toni4asec_ said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:01 pm
i am not so happy about what has been done to my poetry work......... it's supposed to be together not that far apart!!!
pencils_4_hands This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 8:27 pm
really powerfull.. i like the spacing .. brought tears to my eyes... i guesse i can relate
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