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You have no hope



































no chance that life will change


























that tomorrow or the next day



























the stars won’t rearrange































Your only views of this life



























is that you want no more




























selfish acts upon yourself




























that takes you out the door













No regard of what you do





























and what you leave behind



























you say you are alone in this




























how can you be so blind


Your feeling sorry for yourself



























and decide it doesn’t matter


























you will decide what you do



























no thoughts of who might shatter





No stepping outside the box



























of your dark cloudy mind





























you will not give a second






























glance to any ties that bind









And when the final curtain



























blocks out the fading light



























you no longer feel yourself




























and somehow that seems right?





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F0rgtt3nDr34m5 said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 7:51 pm
This is really Really Inspiring (?) I cant think of another word for it.It is something that I struggled with these past few years...

I wrote a lot of poetry this past year, but I cant bring myself to post any of it... I dont like people seeing my work I guess
 
Artamis22 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 3:13 pm
That was very interesting in a good way it was so just i dont know it was cool.
 
Mislead said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 1:46 pm
i love this! and i disagree agree with you about the spacing. i think it works with the theme of te poem because she/he is far away from everybody else like shes in her own little world. perfect!
 
_toni4asec_ said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:01 pm
i am not so happy about what has been done to my poetry work......... it's supposed to be together not that far apart!!!
 
pencils_4_hands This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 8:27 pm
really powerfull.. i like the spacing .. brought tears to my eyes... i guesse i can relate
 
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