Suicide

October 31, 2010
By _toni4asec_ GOLD, London, Other
_toni4asec_ GOLD, London, Other
14 articles 12 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
That time when you feel like giving up... that's when you actually have to push yourself harder (:


You have no hope



































no chance that life will change


























that tomorrow or the next day



























the stars won’t rearrange































Your only views of this life



























is that you want no more




























selfish acts upon yourself




























that takes you out the door













No regard of what you do





























and what you leave behind



























you say you are alone in this




























how can you be so blind


Your feeling sorry for yourself



























and decide it doesn’t matter


























you will decide what you do



























no thoughts of who might shatter





No stepping outside the box



























of your dark cloudy mind





























you will not give a second






























glance to any ties that bind









And when the final curtain



























blocks out the fading light



























you no longer feel yourself




























and somehow that seems right?



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on Oct. 1 2011 at 7:51 pm
F0rgtt3nDr34m5, Holland, Michigan
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This is really Really Inspiring (?) I cant think of another word for it.It is something that I struggled with these past few years...

I wrote a lot of poetry this past year, but I cant bring myself to post any of it... I dont like people seeing my work I guess

on Jan. 21 2011 at 3:13 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
13 articles 4 photos 19 comments

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Its not over till its over

That was very interesting in a good way it was so just i dont know it was cool.

on Dec. 31 2010 at 1:46 pm
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

i love this! and i disagree agree with you about the spacing. i think it works with the theme of te poem because she/he is far away from everybody else like shes in her own little world. perfect!

on Nov. 22 2010 at 8:27 pm
pencilsFORhands SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
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really powerfull.. i like the spacing .. brought tears to my eyes... i guesse i can relate

on Nov. 15 2010 at 3:01 pm
_toni4asec_ GOLD, London, Other
14 articles 12 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
That time when you feel like giving up... that's when you actually have to push yourself harder (:

i am not so happy about what has been done to my poetry work......... it's supposed to be together not that far apart!!!


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