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A Bittersweet Sensation

October 28, 2010
By TaneikaW. SILVER, Joliet, Illinois
TaneikaW. SILVER, Joliet, Illinois
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"The sky is the limit. Just REACH for it!!" :)


The crinkle crackle of the leaves beneath me, a sweet melodious tune that raddled my eardrums.

The fresh dew purged its indulging senses deep inside me.

The swoosh of the wind carried the world’s whispers of serenity.

The peacefulness of my surroundings drifted my mind into a tranquilizing state, filling my world with happiness.

Beautiful hues of red, orange, and yellow embezzle me.

I’m lost in the aroma of a sweetly seasoned October.

A bittersweet sensation, that pulls me in with the swing of fall.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this poem during school while going over fall poetry

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natw said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 12:36 pm
GOOD JOB  : )

Jonathan V said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 12:36 pm

this is a wonerful poem, and i can't wait to hear one of your next poems, because i bet they will be just as goo as this one, or better