Heavens gate

October 29, 2010
By JustinBlaesing DIAMOND, Racine, Wisconsin
JustinBlaesing DIAMOND, Racine, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes a second to say I love you but a lifetime to show it" " Love is like the air we breath. It may not always be seen, but it is always felt, used, and needed"


Spirits rise to meet me at the gate
The gate separates life and death
God looked at me and opened the gate
I walked through the gat but could not look back
I was in heaven and there was no changing that
Spirits stated appearing out of the blue
I asked them where they came from
But they didn’t even know
I was stuck in a new world
A world of only good
God walked through the gate
I asked why I cant see out
He told me that we passed through heavens gate
And there is no turning back now
Heaven was all good
No evil lurked in the darkness
There was no darkness
The gate opened
Spirits poured threw
The gate closed again
I am here forever in the new world
Threw heavens gate


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem on Tuesday, August 24, 2010. I wrote this poem while I was sick with Mono. I was scared because if I got hit in my side, my spleen could rupture, and I could die. To calm myself down, I thought about what heaven was really like. I thought about how nice heaven was going to be and if I would see my deceased love ones. I knew in my mind death was not far away. I had to be really careful with everything I did. I just liked to feel comfortable when I was scared, so I thought of heaven. I hope you all enjoy this poem.

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on Apr. 30 2011 at 7:08 pm
JustinBlaesing DIAMOND, Racine, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes a second to say I love you but a lifetime to show it" " Love is like the air we breath. It may not always be seen, but it is always felt, used, and needed"

I just wanted to say yes, I am better when you commented. Thank you for caring.  I'm sorry I replied to this WAY after I recieved it.

on Dec. 2 2010 at 7:36 pm
loveee7 DIAMOND, San Pedro, California
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"If Your One In A Million Than There's A Million Other People Just Like You."

I Was Wondering If You Are Better Now? And That Day Was My Birthday... I'm So Sorry You Had To Write This At A Bad Time. God Bless You And Protect You From Any Illness And Give You Salvation.


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