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Silver Rays of dullest light that shine upon the moon,
Vigorous and jagged lines stitched together…
Breathing deep.
Air is gray and thick,
Sun is black as night,
Someday coming says the sparrow,
Back from noondays time.
Blue is darkened,
Bright is emerald,
Sapphire eyes is dusk.
Waiting for the morning,
Not impetuous.
Aging is paralyzed.





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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 5:10 pm
i really like it. i like the way even though it confuses some people it makes sense to you...thats what a lot of my work is like!! Well done its really..peaceful..if that makes any sense!!!
 
Leann13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 5:55 pm
thank you:)
 
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