October 25, 2010
By Camille. BRONZE, Roy, Utah
Camille. BRONZE, Roy, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"When you start treating people like people, they become people."

Imagine a world where wild things reside, a world of untamed calamity.

One where we made the rules, painted neon skies, and created unreal creatures.

We’d let the chaos run wild. We’d allow the commotion. We’d just let it be.

You and I, we would create this world.

Together, the possibilities would be unlimited- the impossibilities gone.

Like in Wonderland, “nothing would be what it is because everything would be what it isn’t.”

Because as long as it’s a world that we create, the contradictions aren’t so important, see?

If you and I created disorder, it would be magnificent.

Our pandemonium would be glorious and our chaos would be brilliant.

If our world were real, it would be an admirable mess.

Chaos and beauty could run through our veins, our hearts pumping with adventure.

Out of our souls would pour imagination and into our lungs we’d breathe creativity.

Ideas would bleed on to the floor, and into the sky our plans would scatter.

You and I could wrap our insanity up, while trapping our tangled dreams in.

In our pastel package, we could preserve the world we created.

You and I could create this world and keep it for our own.

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This article has 10 comments.

on Nov. 16 2010 at 6:49 pm
hey i do like it i took it as you letting your mind run it reads really well

drewby said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 6:46 pm
ahhhh JULIET this was so good I love it:) you should start doin it for a leaving its way good:)

Jordanbrea said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:11 pm
This is absolutely undoubtely amazing. It gave me chills..  the good kind!

on Nov. 15 2010 at 9:31 pm
This was very good!(: i dont read poems or this stuff that much but it was really good! goodjob!(: i really like it!

on Nov. 15 2010 at 9:27 pm
zurisunshinehunter BRONZE, Dade City, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"There comes a point when a reasonable man will swallow his pride and admit he's made a terrible mistake. Truth is, I was never a reasonable man" - Big Fish.

Really good job sweetie. :) btw, this is 'zuriiiii' from tumblr (duhh). Ahaha, oh & if you do check out my work please excuse the horrible-ness of it. It's really some of my old old old old work that I decided to post. & it basically stinks. :/

Jay-Z said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 4:08 pm
Happy with a darker meaning. "You and I could wrap our insanity up" I like it :)

D-Som said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 2:21 pm
Wow Camille! I agree with what Kipperoo said on this, I get that mild flavor of a love peom, with just a hint of a dark twisted side to it too! Good work for sure!! :-D

Kipperoo said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 7:30 pm
A runaway love poem that almost has sort of a trippy dark feeling to it (in a good way). A good one by the dreamer/poet Camille!

Mikie's Mom said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 4:45 pm
The imagery was marvelous.  I absolutely envy your ability to string words into thoughts like:  bleeding onto the floor.  Stupendous!

Liss said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 1:18 pm
I love it!  You have fabulous word choice and the lines flow together very well.  A+ work mamm.


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