Time & Days

October 20, 2010
By Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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Time goes by and I still cry .
Days past and I sill wish you were mine.
Days and nights fade but your memmories still remain.
Snow stop but not the tears you causes.
Rain falls but every drop bring back the memmory of a broken heart
The sun rise but it dosn't bring love alive.


The author's comments:
This poem was based on a tuff relationsip I had with my boyfriend of two years

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TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:22 pm
giiglez, would you still call me hon? that also goes for you too bubblez15/tatyana. =)

giiglez SILVER said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 9:50 am
giiglez SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
love always comes with a sacrafice

HELLO HELLO HELLO GREAT JOB HON NICE POEM JK

TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:24 am
Awwww, that was sweet to say. :) No one ever looks for me, I'm usually the guy left in the back lol. You're a nice girl I bet.

on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:42 am
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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yea we are me and giiglez were looking for you yesturday

 


TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:24 am
I have the most utterly feeling we are going to be very good friends to each other.

on Nov. 10 2010 at 7:05 pm
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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thxs trin trin my nickname for you lol

TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 10:15 am
I really like this poem. It is very good. Ouch, I hope your okay. I know I treated you and your friend bad, I hope somehow I can make it up to you. To a slight degree, I've been through the same thing you went through. My girlfriend left me, it still hurts even to this day. I try to forget but I can't. That's one of many reasons why I flared up yesturday, I'm sorry for what I have done.

on Nov. 9 2010 at 12:03 am
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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please leave ur honest opinion and comments thanks

 



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