Time & Days

October 20, 2010
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Time goes by and I still cry .
Days past and I sill wish you were mine.
Days and nights fade but your memmories still remain.
Snow stop but not the tears you causes.
Rain falls but every drop bring back the memmory of a broken heart
The sun rise but it dosn't bring love alive.





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TrinityCreed said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 10:15 am
I really like this poem. It is very good. Ouch, I hope your okay. I know I treated you and your friend bad, I hope somehow I can make it up to you. To a slight degree, I've been through the same thing you went through. My girlfriend left me, it still hurts even to this day. I try to forget but I can't. That's one of many reasons why I flared up yesturday, I'm sorry for what I have done.
 
Smiley13 replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 7:05 pm
thxs trin trin my nickname for you lol
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 7:24 am
I have the most utterly feeling we are going to be very good friends to each other.
 
Bubblez15 replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 7:42 am

yea we are me and giiglez were looking for you yesturday

 

 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:24 am
Awwww, that was sweet to say. :) No one ever looks for me, I'm usually the guy left in the back lol. You're a nice girl I bet.
 
giiglez replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:50 am
HELLO HELLO HELLO GREAT JOB HON NICE POEM JK
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 7:22 pm
giiglez, would you still call me hon? that also goes for you too bubblez15/tatyana. =)
 
Smiley13 said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 12:03 am

please leave ur honest opinion and comments thanks

 

 
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