October 19, 2010
By LittleSissy95 GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
LittleSissy95 GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
18 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Even though with everything that has happen i still think people are good at heart\\\\\\\" -Anne Frank

I leave the memories, in my heart,because that completes me forever.
Forever I will love
Forever in my heart and in my thoughts.
Forever in my dreams.
You are there
you are my forever
M ylove for you i s like nothing you can imagine
Your body will not live forever
but your spirit will
forever is not a word but a state of mind
It's more of a spirit.
A spirit between one another
It can never be broken .
Think of it as an engagement ring it is symbolic ... It means that the love for each other will be forever even long after they're bodies have deceased.
It will only be broken if you want to.
My forever will be the smart way.
ETERNAL LIFE!!!!!!!!!!
By living by the word of God!
God and his son Jesus will live in my heart forever!
Forever!!!!!!!! FOREVER!

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:19 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

This was a bit eccentric, but it kind of shows how unique your style is. Perhaps format some of the longer lines to go along with the rest of the poem. I do love the beginning of this :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 10:40 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I love how you described forever as a state of mind and a spirit :)


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