October 19, 2010
Sweet and delicious.
Dark and rich
Chewy and tasty
It's chocolate
and you know it is delicious.

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delz4 said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:47 pm
true that 
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 5:13 am
I completely agree with you. I LOVE CHOCOLATE. :)
MidnightFire said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 8:11 pm
Sooooo true :)
ChocoMint replied...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 4:55 pm
I like the poem, but I had a sense of emptiness while reading it. There was so little description about it and at the end you repeated yourself a little. It's just my personal opinion, but I feel it could use a little bit more meat, if you understand that. :+P  Keep it up though!
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