The Wind

October 21, 2010
By PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS


Blew against everything
flowers, trees, hair
they even help you
fight against a bear.

When you ride in a car
and the window is down
the wind wakes you up
and your hair goes round and round.

When your tired
and you want to get away from all the stress
all I do really is go outside
and let the wind put me to rest.

You would think its quiet
but there is a noise
not so loud though
not like 6 screaming boys.

pshh pshh pshh
is all I really here
it's just so peacefull
that I may tear.



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on Nov. 23 2010 at 3:38 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

true true......this is iight

on Nov. 22 2010 at 9:33 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

its not bad! i have definitly read worse ;) ha ha no really though I know how you feel there is plenty of peoms I look back and cant believe I wrote

on Nov. 8 2010 at 3:29 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

true true so true

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 11:20 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

If you look back at your writing and don't like it, then you can change it cause you're the one who wrote it :)

on Nov. 8 2010 at 10:13 am
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

i confused

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 10:17 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

yeah...that's where the ability to change it is nice

on Nov. 7 2010 at 12:21 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

true but even writng doesnt always make sense to me....i hate that when i look back at it, it doesnt sound right or like me

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 11:48 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

That's the beauty of writing your own poetry, you can always go back and change it however you want it :)

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:11 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

this poem is kinda my least favorite

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:10 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

i really dont even like this poem actually to tell you the truth

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:02 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

I actually really love wind :) I agree with Xclover the first two stanzas were a little much but I LOVED the last part ! awesome job!

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:24 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

The first two stanzas seemed a little cheesy to me, more the first one than the second though. The last three were good :)

Where I live every now and then we get a massive wind storm and it is so breath taking to just go out into the storm and feel the wind.



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