Feeling Like Cinderella

October 21, 2010
By Zira333 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
Zira333 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
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Feeling Like Cinderella
When I’m with you
I feel guilt
I’m like Cinderella
Covered in silt
You are so many characters
Too many to explain
Your like the evil stepsisters
You have no brain
Your like the step mom
Beautiful and cruel
You’ll marry any man who gives you a jewel
Your like a deceased father
Once sweet and caring
Oblivious to the personalities of
who you were marrying
but your intentions are good no matter what
you’re my fairy god mother
your godd advice comes from your gut
you’re like a prince charming
here to sweep me away
you find my heart when it may stray
your like the mice
my cool friend
transformed into handsome guardes
too the carriage you tend
The birds become steeds
You eat all the weeds
The obstacles that blocked my way
To become the princess
I feel like today…

The author's comments:
This is dedicated to friend. It starts off mean but gradually shows his good side.

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