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Sometimes,I wish I was the
moon
because I could hide, behind
those dark,
dark clouds
And whenever I wanted to…
come out, and
Shine



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HateKnuckle said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 4:04 am
This is awesome. I love the dark nights when you can see the moon shine so bright that you can actually see where you're going. Very great poem.4 stars.
 
Kellie_Sonic_Screwdriver_Fay said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 7:22 pm
short, simple, and to the point. enjoyable
 
alexxeo replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 9:52 pm
thanks!:D your comment is very nice.
 
ashbash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 11:53 am
I love it! Great metaphors, we all need a dark cloud to hide behind sometimes and we all shine at something, your's being writing!
 
steph95 said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 9:15 am

really cute and nice...

and true for a lot of people, including me... :D keep writting

 
Faith B. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 3:55 pm
Simple, elegant, beautiful, and true for many :) I love it.
 
alexxeo replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 10:01 pm
Thanks!(: I'm glad you like it :DD
 
alexxeo said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 10:02 pm
Please comment(:
 
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