Lunar Metaphor

By alexxeo, Saint Helens, OR

Sometimes,I wish I was the
moon
because I could hide, behind
those dark,
dark clouds
And whenever I wanted to…
come out, and
Shine

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HateKnuckle said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 4:04 am:

This is awesome. I love the dark nights when you can see the moon shine so bright that you can actually see where you're going. Very great poem.4 stars.

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Kellie_Sonic_Screwdriver_Fay said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 7:22 pm:

short, simple, and to the point. enjoyable

alexxeo replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 9:52 pm :

thanks!:D your comment is very nice.

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ashbash said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 11:53 am:

I love it! Great metaphors, we all need a dark cloud to hide behind sometimes and we all shine at something, your's being writing!

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steph95 said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 9:15 am:

really cute and nice...

and true for a lot of people, including me... :D keep writting

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Faith B. said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 3:55 pm:

Simple, elegant, beautiful, and true for many :) I love it.

alexxeo replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 10:01 pm :

Thanks!(: I'm glad you like it :DD

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alexxeo said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 10:02 pm:

Please comment(: