though what they don't know

October 22, 2010
By Anonymous

weeping she sits

questions she has

curling in the air

pain she feels

her heart that breaks

longing she waits

hoping she looks

though what she doesn't know

there he sits

lonely and longing

regretful and guilty

she hurts he knows

but wants the best

sorry he is

but knows it's not enough

forgiveness he seeks

sadly he waits

though what he doesn't know

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I just started thinking about when people leave eachother they don't know what the other person is thinking and they would be surprised if they did.

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on Nov. 6 2010 at 8:50 am
missTaco BRONZE, Kingston, Massachusetts
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i never read anything like this before, its good!


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