Simple Goodbye

October 22, 2010
Your lies come off your lips in a way I would have never thought. You told me everything I wanted to hea. She found out you were talking to me and now I write through my tears about the simple goodbye I was waiting to get after all you lied when you said "I Love you." You broke my heart and crushed my dreams babe was it that hard to see i cared and I still do. You were my ticket out of this townmy key to the door that I locked but now that your gone ill never get the chance that I wanted, no needed all I can say is your the one who killed me now I'm lifeless and cold

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Mislead said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 3:15 pm
I love this and your writing. But this is poetry and they has stanzas. I love this tho. Its great. the story is original.
bbnoches said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 4:57 pm
i like this :) i can relate n it sucks when they lie but they're not worth your time or feelings. im feelin the same way u are but idk im getn betr. you should 2 after some time. hope u do
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