I love love

October 22, 2010
By bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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When I see the people there
Looking out for each other
I feel really good about the future of our world;
Love has returned to us
And I will love too;
I will keep the sacred
I love, love, love, love;
Love
Because in the end it's all we will ever have


The author's comments:
I love to love and your love too; I wanted to include my heart and I did. I hope you love my poem!

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on Oct. 18 2011 at 3:31 pm
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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I am so sorry

on Oct. 18 2011 at 3:25 pm
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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Anyway, thank you so so much for reading my pieces! It means a lot. I'll read yours!

 

 


on Oct. 18 2011 at 3:22 pm
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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Never mind! I'm so sorry for blaming you! I am just fed up with getting 1 out of 5 or 2 on everything!

 


on Oct. 18 2011 at 3:15 pm
bluebird SILVER, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
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Are you the one who keeps rating my stuff badly? If you don't like my work, you should stop reading it. It's really hurtful. It's not critiquing anymore, it's just mean.

-bluebird

 


soldout said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 8:49 pm
kinda lame, to be honest. although the last line caught me eye

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:15 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

i love this poem abouyt loving love....its awesome ;) thanks for posting! check out my work?


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