Tears

October 22, 2010
By HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
~ Don't hate, appreciate ~


Tears,
they fall slowly.
Dripping on my paper,
sliding down my face.
My make up running,
tears freezing on my face,
from the cold.
As I sit here,
I think about you.
Oh what would I do
without you?
The thought of it,
scares me to death.
And this fear,
though it may seem irrational,
is the cause of my
tears.



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on Nov. 9 2010 at 3:04 pm
HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
~ Don't hate, appreciate ~

my bf lol or god

jacktheax said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 8:02 pm

amazing whos the person u think about lol

 


on Nov. 7 2010 at 7:26 pm
HarleyPettis PLATINUM, Lawton, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
~ Don't hate, appreciate ~

thanx :D i really appreciate ur feedback :)

on Nov. 6 2010 at 3:26 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

this is really good I like it

XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:18 am
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

I can completely connect with this, it's really good. I love the simplicity of it :). Keep it up!

on Nov. 5 2010 at 2:16 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

and the ending lines is how i know it's a poem :) good job.

i like reading poetry, it's soothing in my mind. Though i SUCK at writing it myself


on Nov. 5 2010 at 11:21 am
2011cblazier BRONZE, Carmi, Illinois
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This is really good! I like it!!!!

trblue GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 9:45 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

it flowed as my own it's really good.

einzige said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 7:59 pm
its good, keep writing !


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