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Tears

Tears,
they fall slowly.
Dripping on my paper,
sliding down my face.
My make up running,
tears freezing on my face,
from the cold.
As I sit here,
I think about you.
Oh what would I do
without you?
The thought of it,
scares me to death.
And this fear,
though it may seem irrational,
is the cause of my
tears.





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HarleyPettis said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 3:04 pm
my bf lol or god
 
jacktheax said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 8:02 pm

amazing whos the person u think about lol

 

 
HarleyPettis said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 7:26 pm
thanx :D i really appreciate ur feedback :)
 
Ducttape.holds.my.heart.toghter said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 3:26 pm
this is really good I like it
 
XCLover said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:18 am
I can completely connect with this, it's really good. I love the simplicity of it :). Keep it up!
 
Medina D. said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 2:16 pm

and the ending lines is how i know it's a poem :) good job.

i like reading poetry, it's soothing in my mind. Though i SUCK at writing it myself

 
2011cblazier said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 11:21 am
This is really good! I like it!!!!
 
trblue said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 9:45 am
it flowed as my own it's really good.
 
einzige said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 7:59 pm
its good, keep writing !
 
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