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In my bed crying
people calling me,"What's wrong?"
and all I told them
is,"That boy is so wrong."

They asked,"What happened now?"
I said,"That boy talking crap."
They said,"Girl I told you
you should've gave him a slap."

I know I should have
but I trusted him so much
now I know what he really is
all he wants is touch.

I hope he knows
I'm not that kind of girl
I don't even wear my hair
all pinned up and curled.

I am a person
who just likes to play around
I AM THIS ONE AND ONLY GIRL
who really really hates clowns.

I am tired of being told
all that you do
now I really wonder
do I even know you?

Hey but get this
when I don't see you,my day is good
and don't think it's because
I grew up the hood.

Everythime I look at you
I just shake my head
I at times actually wish
my feelings for you are dead.

My girls got my back
I can see you don't
you mess with me, you mess with them
and they aint no joke.

So I am moving on
your left in the dark
I hope you know
your crossed out my heart.





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Ryalynn said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 3:28 pm
CAN U GUYS PLZ CHECK OUT MY POEM 1 LIFE 1 CHANCE
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 4:31 pm
oops and my I WONDER
 
Alisha62293 said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 8:37 pm
i love your word choice. keep up the good writing, i would love to read more of your work.
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:18 pm
tanks much:)
 
kmarie14 said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:00 pm
I really really like this peom! the rythm is greattt :) awesome job! ha ha I laughed at the clown part :) itts a greatt peom! awesome job i am gonna go read your new peoms right now!
 
kmarie14 replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:01 pm
**other poems is what i meant to say :)
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:06 pm
lol thaks much now at least ppl understand me
 
XCLover said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:21 am
This is amazing! The words flow so well together but with a nice rythym. Can't wait to read more of your poems :)
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 6:05 pm
thanks much
 
Ryalynn said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:32 am
please read my other ones and see what you guys think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tanks
 
Emily D. said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 3:03 am
 That just tuches my hart with the sad, happy words of an angel. It's so beautiful.
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:32 am
tanks much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Kikki said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 9:23 pm
wow! i really love this, it's so true!! plz keep writing!!!
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:31 am
wow everybody seems to love this poem tanks
 
SaMiLoVe97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 5:12 pm
Hahaha mahn this is crazy. Ive been wit a boi for two years and he's excactly like who u described. Please keep writin'(:
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:30 am
thanks much!!!!!!!
 
fragileblackorchid said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 4:26 pm
whoa, its like your in my head haha something like this happened to me this week, please check out my work too?
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 4:45 pm
ha thats what my freind said too. its like i am in peoples mind but sure ill look at some of yours
 
lola.loves.stars said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 9:26 am
Good Job! Read My Work?
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 3:38 pm
sure ill check yours wow alot of ppl are reading this one poem more than my others......maby ill keep writing
 
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