October 14, 2010
By Celeste Velasquez BRONZE, Mancos, Colorado
Celeste Velasquez BRONZE, Mancos, Colorado
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The attic you said something over the court of midnight
a cave down there
today it’s silent
it was worst than before
mad over his thoughts into the force of dread.

The author's comments:
I had one person reading "Pete and Pickles" by Berkeley Breathed to me while another was reading "The Dark is Rising" by Susan Cooper. Whatever words or phrases I heard I would write them down. Then I added words and edited the poem and typed it.

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