20$ bill

October 8, 2010
By Peter Hanaman BRONZE, Park City, Utah
Peter Hanaman BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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Dedicated to the man who fell in the pit and made me flip out

i shoot off the tramp and start a rotation
the man
he falls

upside down
my vision confused
flailing through the air
limbs whipping around like a rag doll
rotation stopping

upside down in a pit of foam
my arms pinned at my sides
legs up in the air
my foot twitching
and the $20 bill just out of reach

-- october 2010

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