October 11, 2010
By Cynthia Mellin BRONZE, Park City, Utah
Cynthia Mellin BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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I decide to go out with the gang,
worst idea ever!!!
we’re having so much fun
when all of a sudden
the bus pulls up and we get in,
we go all the way at the back,
where we set our packs down,

My phone starts to ring,
and i notice that the older people are looking,
because my ringtone is LOUDDD

I finally find my phone but i missed the call
my friend and I are at the front,
but the one of them decides to go at the back,
i’m having such a good time when all of a sudden,
i hear a loud !!!!SMACK!!!

I see the driver mumbling something,
i also see a car so close to us that we could,
have crashed

I’m afraid to turn around
i knew something was bound
to happen,
I see my friend on the floor
so close to the door

i don’t know what to do
i cant decide if i should go to him or not
but then he gets up and starts laughing
he says,” Good thing you guys weren’t back
here or you guys would have landed on me!!!”

i’m not caring what he’s saying but........
f i were him.............

I wouldn’t be daring to say anything else

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