What was Said

October 14, 2010
By Anonymous

Heavy thoughts
Still Warm and Tender
Marinated emotions
Impossible to dilute
A clear confusion
The confusion unclear
A one way love
Or open travels
The same boat
But whose boat
The intentions
Possible not
Possibly true
Constant riddles
An exhausting habit
What to believe
Over speculate
Is it wrong
A serious matter
Or all in jest
The words spoken
"I want you"

A brief pause
So the heart stops
What was said
A realization
Too much
Too fast
Traumatic effect
Quick! A disquise
Only solution
"To have a good night"
"I want you
To have a good night"
Normalcy regained
Or is it?

Damage is done
The hidden code revealed
Risky assumption
But worth pursing
Pondering long term
A transformation
Groggy in love
Mesmerized with silence
A sloth in movement
Slow with response
Another secret
This time
My possesion
I want you too
But wait
Inner voice fails
Fear prevents
To explore the unknown
Our friendship remains as is

The author's comments:
It's a personal experience of mine. One night i realized how fragile a freindship can be when one love outweighs another and how much guts it takes to advance in any direction.

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on Nov. 13 2010 at 3:08 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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on Nov. 12 2010 at 11:20 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

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ellie75 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 1:27 pm
ellie75 BRONZE, Nunica, Michigan
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I love this. Its and amazing poem. You have great talent. I can't wait to read more of your work. (:

Ninalaw SILVER said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 9:04 am
Ninalaw SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
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“We delight in the beauty of the butterfly, but rarely admit the changes it has gone through to achieve that beauty.”~Maya Angelou

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on Nov. 12 2010 at 7:05 am
Alisha62293 BRONZE, Warwick, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
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