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What was Said

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Heavy thoughts
Still Warm and Tender
Marinated emotions
Impossible to dilute
A clear confusion
The confusion unclear
A one way love
Or open travels
The same boat
Maybe
But whose boat
The intentions
Misunderstood
Possible not
Possibly true
Constant riddles
An exhausting habit
What to believe
Over speculate
Is it wrong
A serious matter
Or all in jest
The words spoken
"I want you"

A brief pause
So the heart stops
What was said
Unexpected
Irreversible
Unbelievable
A realization
Too much
Too fast
Traumatic effect
Quick! A disquise
Only solution
Addition
"To have a good night"
There
"I want you
To have a good night"
Normalcy regained
Or is it?

Damage is done
The hidden code revealed
Risky assumption
But worth pursing
Pondering long term
A transformation
Groggy in love
Mesmerized with silence
A sloth in movement
Slow with response
Another secret
This time
My possesion
Coincidently
I want you too
But wait
Inner voice fails
Fear prevents
To explore the unknown
Our friendship remains as is




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jasmine101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 3:08 am:

i like it alot !

i love its like a quiet song at dusk!

try reading my stuff too comment and vote !!

keep doing this !! its great!!

 
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FlyleafFreakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 11:20 pm:
Wow, I really like this! I can relate to this so well! 5/5 my friend
 
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ellie75 said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 1:27 pm:
I love this. Its and amazing poem. You have great talent. I can't wait to read more of your work. (:
 
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Alisha62293 said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 7:05 am:
I loved it and i hope to read more of your work! Keep it up!!
 
Ninalaw replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:04 am :
thanx! that means a lot!
 
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