Did you?

October 14, 2010
Did you mean what you said?
Or could you look into my soulless brown eyes, and feel nothing
Did that kiss that made my heart sink, mean nothing?
Or did you feel it too, when I gave all I had
Did you care when you seen my heart aching?
Or did you have something else, on your mind
Did that moment feel as unforgettable as it did to me?
Or have you forgotten all we had
Did you notice when I fell to the ground?
Or did you walk right over me
Did you see the world turning brighter around me?
Or did you miss me turning shades of black and white
Did you notice my eyes growing darker and darker?
Or did you never take the time to look into them
Did you feel me drifting farther and farther?
Or did you think I'd be there forever
Did you see me smiling more and more?
Or did I not flaunt it, quite enough
Did you see me get back up again?
Or did I climb too fast for you to see
Did you notice me moving on?
Or could you not see, through your own tears

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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 6:34 am
Wow. I really needed this - it helped me more than you can know. It flows really well and I love your word choice. Amazing.
Jacqueline93 replied...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 8:19 am
thanks! im glad it helped someone else out too! (:
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