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Daydreaming

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words suspended above my head
make the blood in my veins run red
the sweet fruits in our garden turn ripe
and I'm blinded by your smile, as day turns from night

the chilly waters run deep in the river
of which you cross to deliver
great volumes of love trapped in words
but the soft voice in each letter is heard

crossing the barrier of thought and feeling
my head spends and sends me reeling
into the soft arms of happiness, with such disbelief!
but the bewilderment is very brief

suddenly I slide out of the arms
and into yours, fighting off the loves alarms
cause you are a beautiful girl, warming and benign
this is a description of the beautiful girl of mine!





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Geneva A. said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 1:56 pm
i like it! good job:)
 
SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 10:04 pm
Why did you title this "Daydreaming"?
 
Jay P. replied...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 6:24 am
Because i was sitting in class dreaming about my girlfriend.  i was helping a friend out with a situation and started to just go off in my own little world 
 
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