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You & Me & What I want us to be

If I looked you in your eyes,
What would you see in mine?
Would you see that helplessness,
that burning pool of hurt,

[Chorus]
If i gave you what you wanted,
would you finally love me,
If i showed you that I am broken,
could i just maybe have a little of your non-exsistant sympathy,

but no, this is not my reality,
this is just one of my dark fantasy's,
starring you and me,
this may make us enemies

[Chorus]

This is not my reality



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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 6:09 am:
This is powerful and I can totally relate. Short is sweet and you showed that really well here :)
 
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alanacarlene said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 3:08 pm:
Oh yeah and even though it's short it say a lot
 
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alanacarlene said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 3:08 pm:
Awwww I like this it's sad. It's kinda how I feel :///
 
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