You & Me & What I want us to be

October 13, 2010
If I looked you in your eyes,
What would you see in mine?
Would you see that helplessness,
that burning pool of hurt,

If i gave you what you wanted,
would you finally love me,
If i showed you that I am broken,
could i just maybe have a little of your non-exsistant sympathy,

but no, this is not my reality,
this is just one of my dark fantasy's,
starring you and me,
this may make us enemies


This is not my reality

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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 6:09 am
This is powerful and I can totally relate. Short is sweet and you showed that really well here :)
alanacarlene said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 3:08 pm
Oh yeah and even though it's short it say a lot
alanacarlene said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 3:08 pm
Awwww I like this it's sad. It's kinda how I feel :///
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