What is Love?

October 13, 2010
By Desaree H. BRONZE, Lakeville, Ohio
Desaree H. BRONZE, Lakeville, Ohio
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What is joy?
What is sorrow?
What is jealousy?
What is the funny feeling in my stomach?
What is that look in your eye?
What are your lips telling me as they brush mine?
What is this longing I feel for you?
What is this feeling I have with your arms tight around me?
What are these tears falling for?
What is this unbearable pain from?
What is the reason you are hiding from me?
What is this I still feel for you?
What is it you feel for me?
What are these signs your sending me that are so messed up?
What are you trying to say?
What I'm trying to say is I still love you.
What I'm trying to say is I'm going to beat this.
What I'm trying to say is I will hurt the whole way.
What I'm going to do, is let go of you.

The author's comments:
I'm not quite sure why I wrote this, but it is about my ex and how I am going to get through the heartbreak no matter what.

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on Oct. 27 2010 at 3:11 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Wow! Your determination is great and so is your poem. The flow is good and I felt it. Awesome job!!!


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