Blissfully Numb MAG

By Jessica Rutsky, Solon, OH

Even the whitest of snow turns ashen,
mere slush in respect to the
pristine beauty it once was
until the heat becomes too much
and overwhelms the weak defenses
of the innocently fair flurry of frost.

I find myself wondering
whether the snow will ever prevail,
stay brilliantly unscathed by the sun.
Protected forever from harm,
dirty tires and gaudy children’s rain boots.
A chilly garden of Eden,
trapped in a moment of time
and wishing to stay there endlessly.
A constant shield of hurt
with built-in insulation –
no worries of melting
into a puddle of loneliness,
anxieties about fitting in
with the other snowflakes,
or disheartening thoughts of
Spring’s inevitable arrival.
No uncertainties about whether or not
it will ever have the grandeur of an igloo,
the strength of a magnificent snow fort,
or the ever-sought exquisiteness
of a glorious ice castle.

If the snow suddenly got
everything it had ever dreamed of –
a single moment frozen in time’s cold abyss,
everything, for that full moment,
would be flawless.

And it would be enough
to make it through one more
disgustingly sweet Spring
and one more horribly sticky Summer
to have that heavenly night
where everything begins again with Winter,
and endless frozen moments await.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jul. 22 2009 at 7:42 pm
Pink_Butterfly, FC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Never say there is nothing beautiful in the world anymore. There is always something to make wonder in the shape of a tree, the trembling of a leaf."
- Albert Schweitzer.

Good job.

on Jul. 22 2009 at 7:00 pm
ShakingChandeliers SILVER, N.Highlands, California
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Favorite Quote:
"A thin layer of trust had formed in my mind, like a scab."

"I preferred albums to the more modern eight tracks. Albums came with sleeves which reminded me of clean underwear."
-Augusten Burroughs

Man, I need that numb right now.....

That's stellar.

on Jul. 22 2009 at 4:25 pm
Jenny Lee BRONZE, Naperville, Illinois
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Amazing command of language, description, everything.

on Jul. 22 2009 at 2:59 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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that is such sadness and beauty. i love the imagery. its amazing. i wish i could write like that. its wonderful.


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