Gossip Hurts

I just think it needs alittle work. kudos for telling the truth, but it just seems simple. simple can be beautiful, but so can attention to detail.

Extremely true. It was the perfect way to get the point through to the reader. :)

Its very straight forward to the point.

wow. how did you even manage to do that!? it takes extreme talent to get such a strong point across in such a small, simple way. good job, keep it up:) ohh and check out some of my stuff <3

You just said everything that I've ever thought about gossip in only thirteen words.

i love this poem! its so simple but so true and gets the meaning acrosed! keep writing!

good job very straight foward and to the point. i believe you have captured what a lot of poeple are feeling. good job and congrats on being published.