Look My Flower

October 12, 2010
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Look my flower
Time is short
Dont look back
Your not that sort
Petals have fallen
Only one left
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me no

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echome94 said...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 3:06 pm
Feel free to criticize anything i've written. This is based on a silly thing that us girls do every once and a while. I tried to weave my feelings for my ex at the time into it
SMWells replied...
Oct. 31, 2010 at 2:48 pm
Your poem dose not kneed criticized!
AngelForeverBleedingLove This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 12:16 pm

SMWells is right... Your poem DOES not NEED to be criticized, it is quite amazing, and I love it! (ha ha ha sorry I had to do it)


S M Wells replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 3:25 pm
Had to do what?
ThePeaceDaisy replied...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 8:49 pm
She had to do the 'DOES not NEED to be criticized'
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