Look My Flower

October 12, 2010
By echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~


Look my flower
Time is short
Dont look back
Your not that sort
Petals have fallen
Only one left
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me no


The author's comments:
"Dont let your loved ones jerk you around"

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on Nov. 8 2011 at 8:49 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

She had to do the 'DOES not NEED to be criticized'

S M Wells said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 3:25 pm
Had to do what?

on Feb. 7 2011 at 12:16 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

SMWells is right... Your poem DOES not NEED to be criticized, it is quite amazing, and I love it! (ha ha ha sorry I had to do it)

-Angel


on Oct. 31 2010 at 2:48 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Your poem dose not kneed criticized!

on Oct. 25 2010 at 3:06 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

Feel free to criticize anything i've written. This is based on a silly thing that us girls do every once and a while. I tried to weave my feelings for my ex at the time into it


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