Broken

October 11, 2010
By , PJS, NY
The waves crash against the shore,
Dark clouds cover the warm golden sky.
A life is taken, a heart is broken.
Rain pours from the sky of her eyes like never before.
Everything that she knew is forgotten.
Silence fills a heart, there’s nothing left to feel.





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shocking. said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 9:31 am
This is amazing!! Keep writing!
 
BellelaVie said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 11:30 pm
This really gets you. It is amazing, short but you can read between the lines beautifully. keep writing!
 
Suzanne K. said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 3:57 pm
I really liked this. Keep up the writing!
 
crfcaio said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 11:43 am
Nice start, bro, just keep going that you will get better =)
 
soupbowl21 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 10:38 am

You may be new, but you definitely have a way with words! It is beautiful, yet heartbreaking.

A lovely poem, with a well-achieved meaning!

 
Jenx3 replied...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 12:07 pm
Thank you! It means a lot.
 
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