Random Thoughts

October 11, 2010
Walks a hidden valley
Sees an empty thought
Reveals a lonely life.
Makes a bright smile
Laughs a joyful sound
Reveals a sweetened life.
Runs with chains held tight
Screams of terror at night
Reveals a frightened life.
Looks without seeing
Laughs without joy
Yells without reason
He reveals a simple thought.

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rainbowbutterflyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 12:34 pm
thats really really good
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 12:39 pm
Beautiful! I love the shortness of the lines, their bare-bonedness.
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 12:40 pm
Boredom instigates extreme creativity, as I always say :)
Anna-Akua replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 5:05 pm
You are so right! But i also had so much b.s. my mind, the boredom helped me to settle down and write:) thank you so much fo ur comment, pls comment more on my work (i will too)
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