love like this

October 11, 2010
I've prayed each day for the love I deserved
Walked down the road of a voice unheard
Then came my chance to prove I was worthy of this love
We fit so right, like a hand to a glove
A style so like mine, this man can't be real
Exactly what I asked for, truly the real deal
Love is not easy to hold onto, only easy to gain
For a love like this you must experience some pain





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justwannabeme said...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 5:01 pm

amazing!!! :) i love it! so original. i really need some feedback. can u check out some of my work?

thanks! and again, good job!!!!!!

 

 
Ducttape.holds.my.heart.toghter replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 6:26 pm
will do and thanks idk it just comes to me
 
blackraindrops said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 4:47 pm
Wow i really love this! It has a very beautiful flow. I know its annoying when people say this but I just posted some of my work do you think you could take a look at it and give any possible feedback? that would be great (: I love your poem!
 
Ducttape.holds.my.heart.toghter replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 6:27 pm
its so ok and idk really how to write it just happenes
 
kaileye said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 3:23 pm
this is absolutly amazing! i could not have written this better if i spent years trying. well done!
 
Ducttape.holds.my.heart.toghter replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 6:27 pm
thanks i worte it in 8th grade
 
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