live like you are dying

October 3, 2010
“Today is my last day” I thought as I got out of bed.
At least that’s what the gypsy had said
I woke up brushed my teeth and didn’t do my hair.
I gave up on my makeup, didn’t care what I would wear.
I hugged too many people, laughed until it hurt
Apologized to enemies, and actually tried to learn
I made a couple of phone calls, to let them know I care
I fell asleep that night
And in the morning I woke up and realized…
the gypsy wasn’t right.





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XCLover said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 12:01 pm
I love this :) great reminder to live life to its fullest!
 
kmarie14 replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 10:31 pm
ha ha :) glad you liked it :)
 
Ryalynn said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:39 pm
i guess that it wasnt right.....live each day lies its the last.. i lve it
 
kmarie14 replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 10:32 pm
yes yes I agree :) and thank you I am glad you liked it
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:35 am

I love this! It's so creative, and kinda gives you a new outlook on life :)

Thankee.

 
kmarie14 replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 5:53 pm
:) glad you liked it! :)
 
kaileye said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 3:32 pm
great job!
 
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 11:19 pm
Thank you ;)
 
Hummingbird This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 3:23 pm
Nice Job! It's very clever and well written! I also like the rhymes, like "care" and "wear." Five out of five stars!! I would much appreciate some of your comments on my work! Thanks for sharing this great piece!
 
kmarie14 replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 11:18 pm
THANK YOU :) I will be sure to as soon as i can(: thanks for the comment!
 
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