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Eyes Like A Hurricane

October 3, 2010
By weathergirl198 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
weathergirl198 BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
--Edgar Allan Poe


The turmoil can be seen from
afar.
With eyes like a hurricane
desperately searching,
out of control.
They smother happiness
they feed off of fear.
A reflection of the
soul
shows the true nature within.
But the storm will soon end
and all that is left is
darkness
destruction
fear.
Hope seems to have
abandoned all.
A black veil smothers everything.
The heat that fueled this anger is
gone.
It seems to mock now.
Light rain will continue to fall
from those eyes.
As the storm dissipates
down they will tumble,
and take with them that hope.
Any chance of survival
will crash to the ground,
with a deafening
splat.
The world will shake
having known such pain,
but no force can stop it.
No force will win. In the
end
all seems lost,
and all will soon die.
No rainbow shows up,
And silver linings are a lie.
No. This world must gain help from
above.
The Creator himself must
remake the land.
Restore his image.
Restore his light.
Then in one triumphant
sigh
He will pick it back up
and hold it in the palm of his
hand.


The author's comments:
I originally just started out writing this as a metaphor for what someone was feeling and it turned into something bigger than that, reflecting the entire world and all the suffering it goes through. It alludes to Noah's Ark--When God flooded the earth because of its corruption. Even today sometimes I think our world deserves that, but in the end God will be there and reshape our lives, sighing because we are humans, and messing up is in our nature. He's slightly exasperated but still madly in love with us, reshaping the world and our hearts.

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