a bottle of love

October 7, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.


a poem of love is hard to write
for love is cased in a bottle of fright
the heart is a fragile, gentle thing
and when i see your face it starts to sing
a touch on the arm, a kiss on the cheek
your blue eyes make me feel weak
my stomach flutters and my palms sweat
how nervous you make me-i dont think you get.



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on Feb. 5 2011 at 2:50 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thank you!           

on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:19 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

first six lines really get me, they're so well written!

on Dec. 2 2010 at 1:37 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

haha thanks:D

on Dec. 1 2010 at 1:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

.....anyway....I love this captain. its short,simple and-well i know you know that cause you wrote it but- just do your dance captain.

on Dec. 1 2010 at 1:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

.....anyway....I love this captain. its short,simple and-well i know you know that cause you wrote it but- just do your dance captain.

on Nov. 8 2010 at 12:49 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

yeah. i hardly ever get on now though. it'd be easier for me some other way.

on Nov. 1 2010 at 1:40 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i dunno...cant we just comment? its eaiser for me in a way

on Nov. 1 2010 at 7:19 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

3:08 but idk if there's time diffrences or not?

on Oct. 29 2010 at 2:44 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

yeahh. well idk when you get out of school soo

on Oct. 29 2010 at 1:26 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

if you get on here before i get out of school tell me and we can go to the fourm and talk easier and faster than commenting

 

 


on Oct. 28 2010 at 7:42 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

well idk i guess i'm sorry he thinks it's stupid

on Oct. 27 2010 at 1:57 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

dont be sorry haha its not anyones fault

on Oct. 27 2010 at 12:43 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

oh I'm sorry...

on Oct. 26 2010 at 1:18 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

sortt of. but he thinks writing is easy and stupidd.

on Oct. 26 2010 at 12:44 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

yes I am. don't be chicken! j/k does he know you write?

on Oct. 25 2010 at 2:17 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

no your nott haha

on Oct. 25 2010 at 2:00 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

fine. but you know i'm right

on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:32 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i dunno...i dont wanna lol

on Oct. 25 2010 at 8:10 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

I think he would. let him read it and we'll see whose right:)

on Oct. 23 2010 at 9:08 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i dunno...


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