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a bottle of love

a poem of love is hard to write
for love is cased in a bottle of fright
the heart is a fragile, gentle thing
and when i see your face it starts to sing
a touch on the arm, a kiss on the cheek
your blue eyes make me feel weak
my stomach flutters and my palms sweat
how nervous you make me-i dont think you get.





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OriginalCarbonation said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 11:19 pm
first six lines really get me, they're so well written!
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 2:50 pm
thank you!           
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 1:10 pm
.....anyway....I love this captain. its short,simple and-well i know you know that cause you wrote it but- just do your dance captain.
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 2, 2010 at 1:37 pm
haha thanks:D
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 1:10 pm
.....anyway....I love this captain. its short,simple and-well i know you know that cause you wrote it but- just do your dance captain.
 
jhsironmen12 said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 7:41 am

great poem. Absolutly love it... Is that how you spell absolutly?..... ohwell you know what I mean

 

 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 1:30 pm
thanks and haha yeah i know what you mean...yeah i wrote this about a guy who is now my boyfriend(:
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 7:34 am
awww thats so sweet. he must be so lucky. has he read it yet?
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 1:47 pm
noo.....             
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 1:58 pm
wellwhy not?
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 2:33 pm
idk it would be weirdd
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 4:35 pm

i bet he'd love it

 

 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 23, 2010 at 9:08 pm
i dunno...
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 8:10 am
I think he would. let him read it and we'll see whose right:)
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 1:32 pm
i dunno...i dont wanna lol
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 2:00 pm
fine. but you know i'm right
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 2:17 pm
no your nott haha
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 12:44 pm
yes I am. don't be chicken! j/k does he know you write?
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 1:18 pm
sortt of. but he thinks writing is easy and stupidd.
 
jhsironmen12 replied...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 12:43 pm
oh I'm sorry...
 
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