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a bottle of love

October 7, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.


a poem of love is hard to write
for love is cased in a bottle of fright
the heart is a fragile, gentle thing
and when i see your face it starts to sing
a touch on the arm, a kiss on the cheek
your blue eyes make me feel weak
my stomach flutters and my palms sweat
how nervous you make me-i dont think you get.



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on Oct. 23 2010 at 4:35 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

i bet he'd love it

 


on Oct. 22 2010 at 2:33 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

idk it would be weirdd

on Oct. 22 2010 at 1:58 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

wellwhy not?

on Oct. 22 2010 at 1:47 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

noo.....             

on Oct. 22 2010 at 7:34 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
36 articles 0 photos 92 comments

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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

awww thats so sweet. he must be so lucky. has he read it yet?

on Oct. 21 2010 at 1:30 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

thanks and haha yeah i know what you mean...yeah i wrote this about a guy who is now my boyfriend(:

on Oct. 21 2010 at 7:41 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
36 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

great poem. Absolutly love it... Is that how you spell absolutly?..... ohwell you know what I mean

 



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