Solitude and a Blank page

October 6, 2010
By SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"


Solitude and a blank page
my soul aches
to feel where my heart is.
Dreamy state of mind
makes my poetic mood
complete – dream, dream.
And even when words aren’t there,
I am wrapped in a dream
like cottony clouds
with a dizzying affect.
I talk in riddles
once in a while, even I
don’t understand.
Solitude and a blank page
my soul aches
to feel where my heart is.



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on Jul. 30 2013 at 7:21 pm
Superhero_Fan SILVER, Tomorrowland, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Impossible; for How many people did you know who refracted your own light to you?” - Fahrenheit 451

I love solitude and a blank page. Mainly for writing poetry. I loved this poem! You did an excelent job! I'm very sorry I couldn't be more specific. Please keep writing!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:47 pm
dontforget GOLD, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are left unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

Wow!! This is reeeally beautiful! Great work!!

on Mar. 14 2011 at 10:17 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

That really has nothing to do with this...

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on Mar. 14 2011 at 10:29 am
juscziwto, Farmingtion, Minnesota
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Your Beautiful and strong don't let your fear beat your People can say what they want to say, but know I'm always on your side.

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:48 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Writer's block tends to do that to me. C:

on Feb. 19 2011 at 4:47 am
the_sparrow SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

Haha I like that writer's block inspired your writing

on Feb. 16 2011 at 3:15 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i really like it and i can relate, good job!!

on Feb. 14 2011 at 9:55 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

oh, nice catch. Thanks. :)

on Feb. 14 2011 at 9:29 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Very nice. :) I like it. One thing that gets me though is that "affect" should be "effect".

on Jan. 1 2011 at 4:49 pm
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...

wow, the first line got my attention and i just got drawn in like a dream. I love it.


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