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Slowly Dying

October 9, 2010
By Anonymous

Slowly dying
Keeping to myself
These secrets, these words
Caged in so deeply

Air that wishes to be free
Let out to dream
Slowly dying
I choose to be


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on Oct. 19 2010 at 6:02 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Lovely, you express pent-up, trapped, and surpressed emotions so well.

I somtimes have a problem with those caged words, they make your heart feel heavy, and the tears to fall hot and burning.

Thank you.


on Oct. 19 2010 at 5:12 pm
Taylorrrrr SILVER, Plantsville, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
its hard to keep a secret if its written all over your body,

This title caught my eye, and I clicked on it right away! I love this. And keep writing! (:

on Oct. 19 2010 at 7:11 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Out of a world of laughter,
suddenly I am sad.
Day and night, it haunts me,
the kiss I never had"
--Midsummer by Syndey King Russell

"Chances lost are hope's torn up pages"-- "Chances" by Five for Fighting

oh! and the "caged in so deeply"-- that's good, too, lol

on Oct. 19 2010 at 7:10 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Out of a world of laughter,
suddenly I am sad.
Day and night, it haunts me,
the kiss I never had"
--Midsummer by Syndey King Russell

"Chances lost are hope's torn up pages"-- "Chances" by Five for Fighting

The imagery of the "air that wishes to be free" is perfect. :)

wonderful job! :)