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Slowly Dying

By , Miami, FL
Slowly dying
Keeping to myself
These secrets, these words
Caged in so deeply

Air that wishes to be free
Let out to dream
Slowly dying
I choose to be





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IamtheStargirl said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 6:02 pm

Lovely, you express pent-up, trapped, and surpressed emotions so well.

I somtimes have a problem with those caged words, they make your heart feel heavy, and the tears to fall hot and burning.

Thank you.

 
Taylorrrrr said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 5:12 pm
This title caught my eye, and I clicked on it right away! I love this. And keep writing! (:
 
singingdetective said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 7:11 am
oh! and the "caged in so deeply"-- that's good, too, lol
 
singingdetective said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 7:10 am

The imagery of the "air that wishes to be free" is perfect. :)

wonderful job! :)

 
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